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I'm working on a new story, The Seagull's Gift, inspired by our many field trips to the beach when I had Suzanna's School. I'm playing with different ways to depict my main character for picture book, Aria. She loves sounds, colors, and feels. She's a bit bossy. Here's my first attempt:

I think, though, that Aria is a bit sassy:

Too sassy? How about this?

What do you think?

Here are some more thoughts on illustrations for the book:

 Here are the twins. They may or may not be in this story, but I'm sure we'll see them in a story soon!

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